Chicken on every plate at Raising Cane's, Bad Mother Cluckers in Tempe

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• Composite Sketch posted at 1:34 pm on Sun, Jan 13, 2013.

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  "A pair or Tempe restaurants are fighting for the appetite of nearby college students,"
  should be 'is fighting,' since "A pair" is singular. And why is it "A pair OR"??
  That should be a pair OF.

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• Composite Sketch posted at 1:38 pm on Sun, Jan 13, 2013.

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  "where he’s originally from" is redundant.

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• Composite Sketch posted at 1:43 pm on Sun, Jan 13, 2013.

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  "... poultry is the main attraction, albeit in two distinctive styles."
  My guess is that Padilla means distinct instead of "distinctive," because her point is, "... the cooking style itself sets the restaurants apart."

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• Composite Sketch posted at 1:46 pm on Sun, Jan 13, 2013.

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  "“Dealing with chicken compared to ground beef is not even close to what the food costs,” said Micatrotto. “We’re paying a premium for it being fresh, never frozen"
  requires a period to end the sentence.

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• Composite Sketch posted at 1:50 pm on Sun, Jan 13, 2013.

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  This is an impossibly awkward sentence and needs to be recast: "Before each location opened, both outlets researched the availability of chicken-centric options; each also claim to have the best product in town – leaves the ASU and Tempe communities with two solid dining options."
  

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• bfera posted at 4:25 pm on Sun, Jan 13, 2013.

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  Thank you, Composite Sketch, for your feedback on this story, and others. Personally, I appreciate a reader that looks closely at the content, and I apologize and take responsibility for the breakdown in the editing process.

  Again, thank you for sharing, and reading!

  Brett Fera
  managing editor
  East Valley Tribune
  bfera@evtrib.com

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